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03-16-10, 01:24 AM Thanks!
weseelee

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Can you help me on what you thing of my page
bigal advertisement

thanks 4 your time.................
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03-16-10, 11:00 AM Thanks!


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Can you help me on what you thing of my page
bigal advertisement

thanks 4 your time.................

Wouldn't it be sensible to split the word sequence into sentences?

And Big Al (Tom Schreiter) is a very well known and respected person in network marketing ... I would suggest changing your name to avoid confusion.
03-17-10, 08:15 AM Thanks!
soph142

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Hi weseelee
Have to agree with Inge
I thought I had bookmarked the article, mm can't find it :(
It went something like:-
Most people quickly read a website when it looks like 7
A short, catchy Headline at the top,viewers eyes take in the middle bit next.

This is not eye catching for your site. How about using bullets with a few words for each of your many suggestions?
Hopes this helps and good luck
soph
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